Wariofart

Hey Skins, can you review a short story I wrote? The Draft Thank you, I always love your reviews.

Out in the forest, there’s a small tree, just a few years old. All around it are tall oaks, as green as limes in the sun. But the small tree’s ...

Hi Sierra. This prolouge was actually pretty good. It set a very authentic medieval tone. I don't really like Fantasy stories, but this wasn't overly medivealish. The biggest problem though, ...

Hello eranbear. Sorry to say this, but I think you've posted this in the wrong section. If you want to make a forum game set in the Hunger Games, you ...

Hey Rachel! So I know it's too late to edit for the contest, but I'll still give a review of it. I really like the idea of this letter, to ...

Thanks so much for all your reviews and Likes. I tried to take your suggestions. I added another line so all the verses have four lines except the last one, ...

Hey, wariofart here. You're right, this really is a very strange "story". I'm not even sure how I should review it, but let me try. Sorry if this is a ...

Hey, wariofart here for a review. So this piece was decent. It's funny, because I just reviewed something that had the exact same set-up as this. Popular trend? When you're ...

Hey, it's cool you've opened back up! If you want, can you review my poem "I Wish I Could Tell You". Do you do poetry? Anyway, thanks in advance. (piece-by-piece ...

To my human: I wish I could tell you that I love the dog food you give me, but throwing in more of the chicken ones wouldn't hurt And I ...

Hey, wariofart here. The main problem with this piece is that there's no conflict . And conflict is what makes writing a story. Right now, you're just describing yourself riding ...

Hello head4ever2thesky22, welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today. Overall: I thought this was a nice piece, even though it was quite short. I don't think that's a ...

I'm totally confused by the topic for the contest, but your plot is interesting. It is very basic, with no real plot except for set-up and an ending. I like ...

First, just reading your current explanation, there seems to be little use to being either a hippie/bender (names that sound a tad iffy to me, by the way. Consider finding ...

Hey ChibiBear. I hope you don't mind my directness. Overall: The piece on a whole, is quite average. There's nothing really great about it, except for the surprise ending, and ...