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Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Weak and the Wary (PART 6)
hey warlord here. you sure are good in sequels . awesome story and mentains the standard of the previous parts. it surely gives a view of what its like being ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: .
ding ding ding Warlord here for review. Hey you write great .now youve got a awesome serious imagination .The plot is greate ,the mafia , his son ,the murder,sister all ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Ignis ch1
hey Warlord here for review . good story i must say ,i believe that next chapters of this story will also turn out to be as good and even better. ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Identites
Hey Warlord here for review! You started pretty good and ended it even better ,compliments for that. now here are your mistakes ,first of all “Why am I here,” I ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Life’s After-Party
O.k a new idea and i appreciate it.first part was good you explained what was necessary nothing else was needed.But i think you kept the accident part too dull it ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Mr. Homoh Hernaldez
well it is humorous man . I dont know how you guys come up with such ideas. the situation you created with a simple name is really cool. but you ...
May 1, 2014