WaywardBird

LOVED this song. Jeez, wish this were on the radio instead of... say... Justin Beiber? I can almost hear the music, it's lovely stuff. Keep on truckin! It's got much ...

Oh God! Didn't mean to imply that I made it awsome, which is what it sounded like! Not at all! Sorry, I just like the Victorian Era more so than ...

AAWWSSOMMME! Well, perhaps most of it is on my part, because i just love this period in history. At least, I'm guessing it's supposed to be late victorian era? Liked ...

I liked the wording of this poem, it was very picturesque and slow and calming. My only issue with it is that the last paragraph seems out of place. I ...

60 words look hard to do, so I give you credit for even trying :) Alone at last- seemed too brunt, although you kind of have to be for the ...

A: the title does NOT suck B: At first I was a little weary, ( oh boy, another horny toad ) but I actually liked it. It has good wording ...

Chapter 2………. Gaudora Shadow did nothing for a moment, but stood in the corner, playing with the nearly finished candle. "Is this true, Shadow?" Alistair asked softly. Shadow paused a ...

very good story. Very spactacular- good thought and well written like a fable. Can't really find anything wrong :D

Amazing- totally awsome! I can't even pick out a point at which to eat at, a really super good peice.

This is a story I've been sitting on for a while now. It's a bit raunchy (as in roughly written, not erotica) because it's on of my earlier works. I ...

i shall now commence to rudely rip apart your carefully planned story. (Sorry,) 1. (This is mostly me being a prick- don't pay too much attention! :) ) As I ...

At the beggining of this story, the guards don't sound enthusastic to obey Sergent McClellan, when he is supposed to be a great leader. Perhaps a little bit more haggard ...

I Loved this poem! it was very whimsical, and broken like it's theme. Very nicely done, plus the title was a good attraction.

I didn't eye-bleed, if that's what your wondering. I think that the spacing should be consecutive throughout the poem, because it didn't seem to change any tempo and this might ...

Awwww, thank you so much redleaf! I really appreciate the feedback