WaywardBird

NONO! No cliffhangers allowed! (I am planning to follow like this the entire story, so please bear it. :) ) Other than a few grammar mistakes, I can't really see ...

All I have to say is "amen girl-friend", you have just described the serious case of Hypergraphia. The rhyming and the words were simple, yet effective. If you want to ...

First of all, thank you sooooo much for your help! Second, I meant 'enemies' embrace' as a pair of enemies forgiving each other, and moving on, kind of the opposite ...

haha, Thanks aweqs! I appreciate that,

I've been following this story since you posted the prologue, and I LOVE it! It's got that kind of ethereal feel to it, while also managing real relationships. It reminds ...

¡This is my first try at non-rhyming, so please feel free to pick apart as you wish. But, try and make sure to explain yourself, yeah that sounds better. :) ...

I really liked this poem, it was really tragic and strong at the same time. :) My only issue is, to me it doesn't sound like... A human race poem ...

I loved this poem! It truly feels like a greek myth, and it does explain a lot as greek myths do. I liked how it rhymed, yet, not rhymed. It's ...

My only issue is when you say 'metaphorical hoe.' The term just seems out of place in the 'bittersweet' of the poem. I felt the hurt, and I know how ...

I really liked this poem. It put to mind a storm, or some sort of busy but gorgeous chaos. A typhoon perhaps? I liked the line of 'the lines in ...

Meh, like I said, take the advice you think is worthy. And I like my rhyming scheme, even though it is a bit amature :). I just prefer the simple ...

Meh, I try not to bag on other people's hard work, but I didn't really dig this as much as I feel as I should of. I loved the message, ...

It was really good, and I appreciated how this was longer than most others. However, I do have a few nags, and these are mostly just me, sorry :). When ...

Meeehhhhh... I can FEEL the potential, but it sounds like it needs to bake a little longer, know what I'm say'in? Things seemed to move a long just a little ...

Wow, this was really cool. The tempo and the beat type are rarely heard these days, and I really appreciated the new stuff. :), my only issue was I didn't ...