WaywardBird

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

okay, so, I've noticed I confuse a lot of people in my poems, (which is totally my fault, I try to put too much meaning in stuff instead of keeping ...

Hehe, thanks guys. i agree with you for the most part, and I did go from kind of ryhming to not, and that did screw with the quality. Thanks for ...

i really liked this poem. It relates to the everyday girl, the ones that will read this peom. I also like the narrator's courage to come to terms with herself. ...

Awwww, this was a lovely poem. I also kind of liked how it was a story format as well, I think that added a lot. Lovely work

Good, good work. It's the type of thing I imagine myself reading in an English class textbook, with the words flowing the the meanings behind them not totally clear, but ...

This is really a great post. I truly felt the sadness of the mother, and the desperation of the little boy. It is a great story, short, and very bittersweet. ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it really captured the home calling, really caught the instinctive pull to a home base or where ever you came from.

i realllyyyy liked the ending half of this peom. The begining half was good, but the rythm was a bit chunky and got off track a few times. But other ...

Oh God! Didn't mean to imply that I made it awsome, which is what it sounded like! Not at all! Sorry, I just like the Victorian Era more so than ...

A: the title does NOT suck B: At first I was a little weary, ( oh boy, another horny toad ) but I actually liked it. It has good wording ...

very good story. Very spactacular- good thought and well written like a fable. Can't really find anything wrong :D

Amazing- totally awsome! I can't even pick out a point at which to eat at, a really super good peice.

I Loved this poem! it was very whimsical, and broken like it's theme. Very nicely done, plus the title was a good attraction.

Awwww, thank you so much redleaf! I really appreciate the feedback