Weatherthestorm

Can I just say bravo? I think your rhyme is great and your meter and flow are fluid and tight, it is a piece of work that deserves pride. It ...

I read the 2am piece after reading this one, following in the pattern of sokool15. It could be a standalone if you didn't make too many references to what Glory ...

You do indeed have a talent for writing and especially grammar. However, I do have questions about your character dynamics. This event seemed too mechanical, like you were focusing too ...

Ouch. Clockwork angel was a tad rough. I agree with some of the things that were mentioned. I didn't understand the magic-turning-into-a-wolf thing. I'm still waiting for the story to ...

Took me awhile to track down where the story had ended. Finally found it here, though. It's an incredible piece. Were I you, however, I'd try and have a little ...

I like this one. There were definitely less clashes of point of view. There were a few things I think could still stand to be changed. Do not be afraid ...

Wow. I'm not much of a stickler for grammar, though I did notice a lot of stuff that should have been caught or fixed. But i'm more into the content ...

I enjoyed the poem. I wonder, though, what would happen if you tried to use more lines. Some of your lines seemed too long and it kind of breaks the ...

I enjoyed the poem. I always find it entertaining to find people who are able to successfully write 'outside of the box'. I think some of the rhymes were a ...

I'm not sure about placement or whatthe requirements are for whatever forum. whatever, but I thought that the poem was okay. You basically have four stanzas and your writing is ...