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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Tend to the Garden You put soil in my lungs. Black, cakey, dotted with earthworms, filling my airways, packed in tight. You gave me packets of seeds, and I swallow ...
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Re: A girl called February
Ooh, this is an interesting poem! The idea of cotton floss that tastes bitter instead of sweet to keep you grounded. I have to ask, though, what inspired your line ...
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Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
It's Only a Lifetime, Don't Refuse Inspired by EllieMae ’s guess “Heart Fraud” Everyone wants love, and I am just not special, but you seem to be. I give you ...
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Learning New Things (even when they hurt) I have (handprints on) my forearms, (They sting) and I can(not) handle it, I spend hours (tracing their shape, aching and wincing and ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Thank you
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Thank you, @Ventomology! It was such fun to write. @Rose, I’m honored to have inspired you! ^^ I’m sure your poetry will turn out great :3
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Re: The Twelve Muses
I love this poem! It really shows how the heartbreak of the position Hera is in, unable to escape her husband, but almost entirely unloved. Wonderful job!
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Re: A girl called February
What a cute poem! I love using strange metaphors to tell a story, and using chocolate frosting as a symbol for positivity definitely fits the bill. This poem is a ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Recipe for Disaster Inspired by Snoink ’s guess “Heart Fragments in Pickle Jars” Ingredients: 12 hard-boiled months together 2/3 cup loving you 4 teaspoons heart fragment relish 2 teaspoons fres
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Ahh, thank you
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Re: Heart Fragments in Picture Frames
Future Goals I hear the way he treats you. It's hard not to, really, Yelling and screams echo through this house, sink into the foundation, I don't know if I ...
Apr 2, 2024 - Re: on code and conlangs Apr 2, 2024
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Re: on code and conlangs
Oof. Relate to the Mock Trial lost >.> But as Lim said, it's a very unique take on rainbows, taking it out of its usual "treasure at the end" perspective. ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: A girl called February
Looking for replacements In “Sit Still Look Pretties” These lines. Phenomenal. I love them. This whole poem is so good.
Apr 1, 2024 -
Re: The Sheer Audacity of Refusing to Give Up
Ooh, I love tankas! It's so impressive to see how you made your message clear despite the syllable count
Apr 1, 2024
