WeepingWisteria

Hello, Horison! Thank you so much for the review!! I am glad that you enjoyed the story and the ending. I was worried the cut to the police officers would ...

Hello, Dipro! Thank you for the review. This was written in my classic stream-of-consciousness poetry style, where the narrator just writes what they are thinking with more focus on their ...

Hello, Ina! Thank you for the review. Can you point out any specific lines that seemed messy?

Ahhh, thank you Harry!! ^^ I am glad you enjoyed this one! This one was really fun for me to write, so I am glad you found it so enjoyable. ...

Yay! I%u2019m glad. ^^

Ahh! I totally forgot to respond to this. >.> Thank you so much for the review! I love your chocolate metaphors (and I%u2019ll have quite the interesting box by the ...

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Ahhh! Thank you so much, Mint.

Ahhh, thank you.

Yeah, of course. :]

The hot chains around the voice box bit was figurative. It%u2019s supposed to represent the inability to speak.

Ahh, thank you much, Seirre! This poem meant a lot to me, and I%u2019m very glad that my writing conveyed that properly

Okay, yay, I'm glad!!! And yesss, the em-dash. My favourite punctuation because it's so dramatic. XD

Ahhh, Mint! Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. ^^ This one was really special to me, so sharing it meant a lot.