WeepingWisteria

Hello! The repetition of the words wind, crushed, tears, concrete, chains, and ground were a part of the poetic style I used. As I said, this poem is a sestina ...

Thank you for the wonderful, in-depth review. I do find it incredibly helpful, and I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you! You too.

Of course. And thank you.

Thank you!

Thank you so much! The eternal warrior of the reviewer is reviewing a style they don't prefer but thank you for giving it your all. I wrote this to be ...

Thank you so much! I%u2019ll keep that in mind.

This poem was written specifically for the event going on right now: The YWS Olympics.

I%u2019m not quite sure what you mean.

Thank you so much for the review! While I agree this format is perfect for representing a reflection, it%u2019s actually a Japanese style! It was really fun to write and ...

Oh, wow! Thank you so much for the review.

Beautiful poem, chikara!

Thank you for the review!

You guessed precisely how I planned this song. The start would be all sweet and cheesy, pianos and drawn out words. Then, everything would stop for just a moment before ...

To make this clearer, I would suggest adding a transition. Maybe saying that, the cheers turned into screams%u2014the blue and green stained with red. There%u2019s a lot of ways to ...