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  • Other Poetry Re: A Prayer

    I tried to read between the lines, but I ended up loving it just same, even though I don't get it. awesome. Much love AliceXoxoxo

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Myspace!

    I heart Myspace here's mine. xD

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)

    Tis me with my new hair xD

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Untitled about London bombings

    Personally, I didn't think I was making a political statement with this peice, strictly trying to convey the inhumanity the men possessed. I also was trying to look at the ...

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Mechanics

    Thank you very much, I do write very sad and dark prose I admit, but If a piece of writing moves you to laughter or to tears, I think that's ...

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: To forgive, divine

    It seems so true. Beautiful description, nice work. Much love AliceXoxoxo

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: not even a farewell

    I love the concept. It's like you bled all over the page. I don't think I can really comment on the choice of words in poetry like this, it feels ...

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Lusting in the Backseat of a Car (R)

    That's hot. (Oops that's Paris Hilton's catchphrase) Oh well I just stole it. 8) AliceXoxoxo

    Aug 31, 2006
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Almond Eyes Wants To Fly

    I liked it. It was touching and very realistic sounding. Some of the sentences fell over each other and became confusing though, at times I wasn't sure what I was ...

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I haven't written in a long time.

    This is my latest effort, it's not my best work by far I feel I have lost something important in my skill, I took months off to discover what it ...

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Official Polls Re: YWS Needs A Mascot!

    I think it should be an owl! :)

    May 13, 2006
  • Media Reviews Re: Steinbeck

    In my opinion a genius, Im reading Grapes Of Wrath at the moment and have already read Cannery Row and Of Mice and Men.

    Apr 25, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: That unexpected kiss

    Beautiful, I love this. "You revealed your love for me I’m taken by the metal droplets And the acidic taste of rain Leaden fingers on my hips, I taste You ...

    Apr 23, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The still of night

    This is a lovely idea I like this: "Darkness shall leave as nature awakens, For light takes over and remains forsaken. The chapter shall close and open its gates, another ...

    Apr 20, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A lack of color...

    Nice imagery, was the theme inspired by the song by death cab for cutie "A lack of colour" ? I agree with the girl who fates loves, that verse doesn't ...

    Apr 20, 2006


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