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Wow. I believe. The dust bowl =) Dont.know.if.im.right?!

This is really sexy, good job. :D

You think outside the box, I thought it was pretty amazing. Much love Alicexoxox

It's overcrowded with imagery, I don't understand it at all, grammar isn't that hot But it's beautiful. Much love Alicexoxoxox

I tried to read between the lines, but I ended up loving it just same, even though I don't get it. awesome. Much love AliceXoxoxo

Personally, I didn't think I was making a political statement with this peice, strictly trying to convey the inhumanity the men possessed. I also was trying to look at the ...

Thank you very much, I do write very sad and dark prose I admit, but If a piece of writing moves you to laughter or to tears, I think that's ...

It seems so true. Beautiful description, nice work. Much love AliceXoxoxo

I love the concept. It's like you bled all over the page. I don't think I can really comment on the choice of words in poetry like this, it feels ...

That's hot. (Oops that's Paris Hilton's catchphrase) Oh well I just stole it. 8) AliceXoxoxo

I liked it. It was touching and very realistic sounding. Some of the sentences fell over each other and became confusing though, at times I wasn't sure what I was ...

This is a lovely idea I like this: "Darkness shall leave as nature awakens, For light takes over and remains forsaken. The chapter shall close and open its gates, another ...

Nice imagery, was the theme inspired by the song by death cab for cutie "A lack of colour" ? I agree with the girl who fates loves, that verse doesn't ...

Actually in Britain 16 is legal. I have the age gap because this story isn't conventional, it deals with rape. Mark is a lost soul, plus for the fact he ...

The first poem, incredible. The second a different style but It was jumbled in a good way, like thoughts. It was really deep and meaningful.