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  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Anatomy of an Asshole, Part One - Hearts Are Red:

    Small Details/Fun Facts: Torn by (a)parts This portion of the poem is hinting at the idea that sexism is still prevalent today. (This line is also referencing the horrors that ...

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  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: The joy of books

    Beautiful! I must say, your usage of metaphors and similes gives your writing a feel of wonder. You're quite the impeccable writer!

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No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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