Willow

Thanks Emma :D You're the only one who actually reviews my stuff thanks

Thanks Emma :)

Thanks guys. I changed it to loaves of bread. :D

God, I really liked this. It's really good. I don't know what to say. It has this weird muted effect on me, don't really know how to describe it.

Sorry Emma, but I didn't like it that much. Like Sureal said, he writes in simplistic tones. I don't really like his style of writing, although the gore descriptions are ...

Okay, I really don't know what to say. It's interesting and the form is original. If you go on with this thing i'd like to read it. Interesting :D

Thanks Emma :D

Thanks Emma I corrected the typo. Do you think I should post more of this story?

Okay, I corrected some things that dreaming_mouse pointed out. :oops: Thanks for the crit everyone!

This is kinda like a prologue. I'm sorta working on something to follow it up but I haven't had time write lately. Thanks guys :D

That sounds great. I just think there's a typo or something when you wrote: 'the girl watched him, her face still his her fear . . . ' Either that ...

I guess you're a christian then? I've also imagined writing to be something like that, though I hope heaven has more in store than just happy thoughts, but I guess ...

Hey thanks for the reviews guys. I was kinda destracted when I wrote this and had to go before I could go further. My spelling is horrid when I don't ...

I think that you should try to find other words, because it adds a bit of substance when you describe things like that you know?

I liked it too. You have a great style and you sound very deep. I didn't really understand it that well at first but I caught up. Over all, it's ...