Winged067

hi i'm here for a review lol first of all, the story is really good, it got me really hooked in on what was going on, but the thing is, ...

Hello! So I guess I'm supposed to give you a review? lol. The story was really good, it had a nice plot. And I could tell that this is based ...

Hi! This is a really good story here, and I really love the suspense, and how it felt as if you poured your emotions into this piece of writing. But, ...

I loved your details in the writing! It felt vivid, and this is just a great poem! One thing is though that you never mentioned who "you" was, although I ...

I really liked how there was a really good meaning behind the words! You have shown that there is a picture of "you" as if in the desert, or that ...

I really liked it! It was descriptive, and I liked how it was so unique, as well as held a sort of meaning behind it that you don't really see ...