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  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Honey and Steel

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this short story, and I think you've done a great job! I like how you've set it back in time, giving it a bit more ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: That's Just My Life

    Hello! I'm here to leave a little review. I think this flows pretty nicely, and it is easy to read. It definitely has a songlike structure, rhythm, and flow. It ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

    Hey there! This is a cool poem, and I like the lighthearted feel. I see the deeper meaning, though, and I think you've done excellent at conveying it without directly ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Hey there! I see you're already getting down to business and posting your own works. Good for you! So I'll give a few comments on this poem. I really like ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pearls

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. Your rhyme scheme is well balanced and easy to follow. The poem is short, but does a great job at painting the mental image. ...

    Aug 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No Longer Flowing

    Hey there! This is a lovely poem, and so relatable for passionate writers. I really like how you've depicted writing - through the phrase "the words" - as something alive ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: somedays imaginings

    Hey there! This is really cool, and so beautifully written! I admire the imagery and the thought that went into keeping the content of each stanza consistent with its respective ...

    Jun 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Colour Red

    Hey, there! What a creative piece. I like how you've just jumped right in and explored your topic, expanding the idea of the color red to include so many thought-provoking ...

    Jun 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Cafe

    Hey, there! Dropping by to leave a review. I read this awhile back, and now that I've come across it again, I should write the review I meant to write ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1

    Hey, there! This is a cute and amusing little story. It's clever of you to snatch that bit of insight into the minds of a couple birds and build a ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Night Sky

    Hey, there! This has got some really nice imagery. I like how you start out with the narrator speaking of their love for the night sky, simple and basic, with ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: i didn't love me

    Hey there! What a thought-provoking poem here. It's awesome how you've come up with so much imagery to depict your ideas. You've done well starting with something that feels innocent ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: crushed

    Hey there! Nice formatting for this poem. I like how you've put it on a background image. The rainy scene fits the mood of the poem, especially considering the mention ...

    Jun 23, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Satire Re: Buy The Excitement Shower! With it you can experience the Arctic or the depths of hell!

    Hey there! Wow, this is so imaginative and creative! Definitely made me laugh. I like how you've abandoned all normal concepts in this advertisement-style work. Also, the introduction is so ...

    Jun 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: what others don't see

    Hey there! Thanks for sharing this poem. It's laid out nicely, and I like how you divide the stanzas. Definitely my favorite part of the whole thing is how you ...

    Jun 17, 2021


"Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"
— Albus Dumbledore