WinnyWriter

Thanks for sharing this poem! The title was intriguing, and I see you've brought that theme of being a hero into the poem itself. It seems like this piece is ...

Hello! Let me get right into a review. I love the descriptive imagery in the opening of this poem. It really sets up the feeling of a lovely morning. I ...

Hello, and happy whichever day you read this on! :) First off, thanks for sharing this piece. (I think it could very reasonably classify as poetry.) Writing is one of ...

Hello, I'm going to leave a quick review. First off, thanks for sharing this piece. I tend to assume pieces like this are narrated from the perspective or personal experience ...

Hey, there! Allow me to leave a few comments. Thanks for sharing this little essay. It's easy to see how you've incorporated the idea of loneliness at home on your ...

Hello! Allow me to leave a short review. :) This seems like it is a poetic piece. I am assuming the slashes are where line breaks are supposed to go. ...

Hello, and thanks for sharing this little story. It's short and easy to read, and I can see that there is more meaning to it than just a little tale. ...

Hello, I shall leave a quick review! :) Interesting choice to use old English sounding words. It really is an exercise to take it upon oneself to write in this ...

Hello! Let's get to a review. This was a fascinating poem, and it stood out to me for some reason I can't quite identify. I think one reason might be ...

Hello, I shall proceed to leave a review below! :) It's interesting that this poem is called "Untitled." At first I thought maybe you just hadn't titled it, but then ...

Hello! I'm going to leave a quick review. First off, thanks for sharing this work, which I presume is based on personal experience. It's always helpful when people help spread ...

Hello! Thanks for sharing this poetic piece. Let's get into a review. Your topic centering on your (or the narrator's) mother is clear, and though we don't get to the ...

Hello, I hope you're doing well! Thanks for sharing this poem. First off, the format is really clear, your lines are separated well, and the stanzas are clearly divided. I ...

Hello! This is a cool poem, so let me get into some more detailed feedback. I like the way you broke up each phase of life and its corresponding sentiments ...

I guess this has been around for a while, but you've been reviewing some of my stuff, so I thought I'd check out something of yours! I really liked the ...