WinterGrimm

There was a definent sword and sorcery feel to the piece and Ravin comes across well as a reluctant hero. There is promise to this idea but to me it ...

I did like. It really captures the emotions and feelings of what goes on in those AIM conversations. Although I thought it went on a bit too long. What might ...

I'm sorry to say I wasn't crazy about this story. There's a decent amount of good dialog but some of it is obvious exposistion. Plus there's alot of telling and ...

I still love this poem. Although I agree that the first verse looks a bit too crowded a few lines seem longer than they should be for a nice look. ...