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  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Bruises

    Really deep, sad poem... The style is lovely and the description is incredible I especially love "One day he will realize that black and blue are colors not made for ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Her..

    Really nice... Sad and touching in so many ways. I love the whole story, and this is one of those times when quality really makes up for quantity. Just a ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: High Wire

    This is an incredible poem! I really loved it, and overall , it was a delightful read. The flow and wording are really nice, as is the story it tells, ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Everything in Between

    Really lovely piece, but just a few things that could be fixed up: -The flow of the lines doesn't seem too natural, so it might be helpful to try and ...

    May 31, 2015


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