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Top 8 rules for writing Fantasy by Melissa Kelly. Check that out. It's helped me a lot with my own novel (which I hope to post on YWS soon) and ...

Warrior Princess -- This is okay, as far as the quality of the poem goes. There is some pretty - if not clichéd - imagery, and he flow is generally ...

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*claps enthusiastically* Great article, Azila! It is really helpful, especially that last bit about the sentence structuring. :) ... you might want t proofread it, though, because I saw a ...

Hehe... ... but I'm not changing my character's name, unfortunately. >.> Does anyone else have something to say? Please?! I haven't started yet, but I'll do that tonight. Maybe I'll ...

Ning! I actually think this is a very interesting story, but there are tons of grammatical, punctual, and spelling mistakes. You might want to try proof-reading this before you post ...

I still owe you two crits, don't I? Well then - >> Critique two of three >> I think that I’m in love. Crap! Now that I finally put that ...

(I used to be Ayra) Ha, research is so time-consuming. Yes. I mock your pain! ... no, I don't really. I just really wanted to say that. :P I had ...

I was Ayra ! But now I'm not.

Here she is! (This is really off-topic, but oh well.) What kind of mutt is your dog?

StoweAway! I really like the story (btw, sorry it's taking me so long to crit) but I read another book called 'STOWAWAY' which I kind of hated, so... it puts ...

Haha! I am here second. *feels triumphant* Compared to Derrin’s devastating, yet graceful strength, Sillon was hopelessly doomed when it came to combat. I;m not sure about the comma after ...

Hey Fangala! :oops: Sorry it's taken me so long to crit this... I had left the barren valley behind and was now wading through waist-deep grass under a sparkling sun. ...

Guinevere?! Thats my name! *dies* Haha, in a way. A couple years ago at Sutton, I was planning to write a fan-fic for the Arthurian legends and I was using ...

I know double-posting should be avoided, but... .:UPDATE:. I had a new idea! Guinevere (a denizen of the kingdom) could come to Earth, and become a student at Ayra's school. ...