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That was really good! The rhyming didn't seem forced and it flowed very well, and also, the imagery was excellent. I agree with Jasmine Hart that your first stanza was ...

As promised, I have posted the revised edition of my original piece 'First Kill [Rough Draft]'. But when reviewing, please be aware that this is but an excerpt from my ...

Thanks everyone! Yeah, I took out some description but I think it's important to have more than average in Fantasy because, well, it's hard to explain. I won't bore you ...

Ooohhh. I liked this. However, it really is short. I would suggest saving it as a draft until you have a decent length, but maybe that's just me. Anyways. I ...

Lol twit, that's funny! In a kind of catastrophic way. :P Yeah, I clicked on the eggs. Heehee.

Username: 96% (Love it. Awesome!) Custom Title: 75% (I don't get it, but whatever.) Avatar: 82% (Heeheee, it's dancing!) Country: 70% (Bleh. Video games rot your brains; didn't you know ...

Now that I've read some of your poetry, I can recognize [to some extent] your style. It tends to be vividly emotional, but you always infer the feeling; you never ...

You know, I always feel really awkward reviewing work done by people older than me, not to mention more experienced than me. But I saw that you won the 'Best ...

This was really good; although you didn't directly express your emotions, there is plenty of feeling in this. I really liked the imagery of the bruised apples and the trees ...

Wow, that looks like one tough lady. :P The proportions were excellent and the details were very well-done. I agree with Via on the broken gun thing though but the ...

The sun looks really cool, but it does make the girl--is it you?--look faded. I like the trees but I don't think the girl should be leaning out as much. ...

This is really good, but I have some suggestions: - The head does look a bit small, and his ears seem to be rather larger than I remember. :P - ...

This is quite well-drawn. :) The shading is good and the mother looks very realistic--I love her hair--except that her hands are a little too masculine looking. Also, the baby's ...

Oooohhh! The hair is awesome! I love the kind of electric tint and the girl looks really cool. Is that you? If so, your very pretty. :) I don't like ...

The back half of his body looks disproportional and a tad bumpy, like he has an odd skeleton or musculature. But the face is full of character and that's really ...