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It's one of yours, Cade ^.^ Forgive me if it isn't a very helpful review--poetry is not my forte. But I'll try! :P

This isn't my style of poetry, but I thought these were pretty good. Strangely enough, I liked the first one better. Maybe it was because I can't live without description? ...

This is how I would format it if I were you: Oh fear is great Fear is strong It may stop us from doing what's right Or to do what ...

Another girl stood several metres away from the first as they threw a white and black striped football back and fourth. There's no 'u' in forth. she kicked the ball ...

Lol, if I had a doll like that, I would so play with it. The shading is excellent, and it looks very three-dimensional. Everything looks very realistic. I loved the ...

*digs a hole* Oh no! Constipation? *hides in the hole* It'll never get me now!

Two hours later, Dante snorted in disgust, as Felix drooled and snored on Dante’s shoulder. Get rid of the comma after 'disgust'. ^.^ Oh well, Dante figured. Now was as ...

Oh god. My name is Camille. :shock: Now I'm seriously freaked! That was well-written, though. However, I can't give an in-depth review because everything has already been mentioned. :( Great ...

Sounds very angsty and possible even violently emotional. I would look at it then put it down, unless the back cover was interesting. Not my title... Speckle Dew (I have ...

I also agree. Sometimes mysterious people in my story wear cloaks--but that's to blend into the shadows when traveling at night, not just to look mysterious. Besides, the cloaks are ...

Awesome! It sounds like a Werewolf book--I'd buy it :D I think I'll use 'Starlit' for my story then :) This is the title of someone in my class: Violet

I would look at it, definitely. Depends on what it was about though. Starlit

It's a cool picture, but it's hard to tell what you really look like. xD

Gwen creamy oak brown [eyes]

Sounds cliched. I am tiring with this, but a few more: 1) Wolf eyes 2) Midnight 3) Dark Star 4) Stars on Water 5) Ancient Rain