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I loved that! :D It flowed really nicely and projected excellent images in my head. The words you used were vivid, poignant, and they keep repeating themselves over and over ...

I agree with Azila and canislupus :) This was interesting--it caught my attenion and held it until the end. It is rather short though... If you post more, I'll read ...

I agree with BBB and Swirl Antara; you should use 'Why'd you go' less and change the last two phrases. This is very sad--but I like it too. Anyways, Keep ...

The roar of the bass like waves on the shore caressing my face shattering my inner core [comment 1] The cry of the violin like the song of the eagle ...

Very nice! It's about the Twilight trilogy, right? I've read those books. They rock! The only thing that bothered me was that in places it sounded a bit stiff. Here's ...

That was really cool! I love wolves--actually, I'm working on a story called 'Wolf Heart' :P Azila already mentioned all the things I noticed, so I haven't got anything, well, ...

Short, but very nice! Lovely descriptions! In the Land of Harmony By Summer Chapter 1 A Drop of Sun Across the room he sits, like a drop of golden sun. ...

Well...*frowns* It's definitely not my kind of poem--too, erm, soppy. Also, I couldn't help but notice that someone called Darren_Shan_fan wrote a poem that is very, very similar. The exact ...

I'm sorry, but that was the most gruesome, horrific, gory thing I have ever read in my entire life. I actually felt sick reading that--cutting out people's eyes? Killing their ...

(To that one girl, whose heart I've yet to win...) You once said to me you wish to lead A life of love and simplicity. All of these things I ...

I really enjoyed that poem--the stanzas were simple, but I really felt the mood and could visualize it quite clearly. As usual, I have nothing helpful to say because a) ...

Well, I have nothing even remotely constructive to say--everyone already mentioned the things I noticed. But anyways, great poem! I don't think it's emo...it's kind of, well, painful sounding? I ...

I don't know what's with all the double-spaces, and it was really short. To be brutally honest, this wasn't...well, it wasn't very good. You need to add alot more detail, ...

One: The New Kid He gave me a crooked grin. My heart fluttered with excitement. He looked so gorgeous. This immediately made me think of 'Twilight'. You know, because Edwards ...

My life was never really bad to begin with. My parents cared, i did well in school and I had lots of friends. I was very happy and I never ...