Wolf

Yay! I'm going to continue reviewing this, and as usual, my comments are in bold. :) On set everything about him seem forced, and uninterested as if he had something ...

:) Thanks Fangala! I'll work on that..I have a word document where I am editing it but I'm not quite done yet.

Heehee lyrical_sunshine! You're right :lol: I should, therefor I am! Anyways, maybe I will go to heaven after all...:twisted: It depends...what flavour the cake is? Neer. Oh no! :( :cry: ...

Ok, I really want to review this, but I have to do my homework now :( I promise that I will as soon as I can though!

Alright, now that you've posted more, I can review the rest! :D My comments are in bold . In the Land of Harmony By Summer Chapter 1 A Drop of ...

:D Thanks! Lol, I'm obsessed with wolves too. They're the coolest! 8)

Oh, ok. But I think you should make that idea more evident in the poem. :wink: No, Ayra is good...still haven't decided whether Kesha would be better...

Thanks! Squee--I'm getting so many critiques! Yayness! =) Oh I'm in such a good mood! *does cartwheel* Wheee! Anyways, I'll stop being crazy now so I can go eat dinner ...

Much thanks to both of you! (Ashgan and Majestic Fantasist) I actually did freak out a bit when I woke up, lol. But I'm glad I had that dream ^^

Thanks! Sweet new avatar, by the way! :D

Thanks everyone! Once I do my mini math exams (a series of tests) I will be adding to the following pieces: -City of Ashes (I'm making a part 2, because ...

Thanks! (For reviewing my other topics too!) Yeah, I've been thinking about how to incorporate my main character's history. She's young, so it won't take too long, but I don't ...

Thanks Seraph! No, it wouldn't hurt to try :D If you posted your dream, I would read it ^^ Anyways, I'dd edit this...soon, hopefully :) Thanks again, .:Ayra:.

Thanks for the critiques everone! Squallz: I'll consider what you said about the dwelling deeper, but I really can't help it if my dreams are cliche. I know alot of ...

Thanks! I wonder what I'll dream of tonight...:P If it's interesting, I'll write it down. Maybe I should have a kind of dream journal or something...