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Thanks you guys a lot ^^ Kept me trying to write poetry despite all my self-awareness of how much I'm bad at making it rhyme when I want to put ...

In comparison to WordsInMyMind's poem about Wisdom this made me imagine a writer sitting, leaning against a tree, and writing this down on in his notebook. The reason for that ...

It's a free rhyming as I noticed, but it compensates the lack of rhythm with it's sentence structure and words used. Whole work feels like an advice from somebody, who's ...

Wanted to switch from blood theme poetry and tried out something that I was inspired to write from a chat with my friend about how people get hurt from betrayal ...

Cheers! So finally the time to review your piece of work =) Alright, I'll go according to my usual review form. Let's start with the mistakes! Mistakes 1) The doctors ...

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I'm really grateful ^^ Thanks a million, I've finally understood the main mistakes I do without noticing them ( Shamefully, as english is my 3rd language, I've got trouble with ...

Cheers! Haven't read such a story in a while, it sure has got some original elements despite the a bit "cliche" death scene ( sorry about that, just have read ...

Cheers! Haven't seen a talk about this in a while ( We do hear a lot about them in my class in my country ). While reading I spotted a ...

That's :ftw: =) I owe you a million, thanks ^^

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Thanks a lot to all three of you. I really feel happy I managed to write one of the first poems that actually wasn't bad =) In terms of a ...

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I agree with the both posts above. Aside the very little information about the two MCs, it feels like an informational bomb about the world. I believe it's good to ...