WolfyAlex

Thank you, and I will try to use more imagery it will probably be on my next poem though.

Thank you! I have a few more poems of mine in my blog but I'll be writing more. ^-^

Thank you, I'm glad you like it and I should probably add in commas and periods. just so bad at grammer XD} I will go fix the within too.

This is beautiful. Thunder has always amazed me and I love the way you describe it. Like how you say that they all turn purple, voilet it makes me think ...

Your poem is really good. It is quite creative and I can relate it to a lot of different things in my life, which is one of my favorite things ...