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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Logophile Mutilated & Keen

    Logophile Mutilated Interesting and yet it was short, powerfully short. I enjoyed it very much and it described everything with great beauty and detail. I enjoyed reading it. Keen This ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Staring into the Beautiful

    I read it so I must be an awesome person! Lol, joking. It was a very beautiful poem and I like the poems with a name that isn't in the ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 1 -- Beginnings

    PLease keep writing more onto this book because I love it! There is nothing, absolutely nothing, that you can change, because it's perfect the way it is. I enjoyed reading ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'll Lie

    Wow. I really did find myself speechless after reading this. Why? It's sooo so so so good. Nothing was wrong and thw words flowed effortlessly off the page. Even I ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rhythm

    The title stood out to me and so did the poem itself. Rhythm was shown in the poem so it really fits the title. I was drawn in by your ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forever 18

    This is a very interesting thing. It sounds like a vampire story and I really hope that you'll make it longer because if you let it, this could become a ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Black Coats-1

    Interesting chapter for your first one. I will agree that there were some sentences that didn't make much sense but you can fix them easily. For your first chapter, I ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hunted ch. 19

    When I read this chapter, I forgot how the other chapter was so I reread Chapter 18 and then read this one. This was another great chapter and I'm finding ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hidden- Chapter Four

    Yeah um, I just reviewed chapter five before reading chapter four. Haha. My mistake. But, I went back to chapter five after reading chapter four. You really are a great ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hidden- Chapter Five

    Hey. So I guess I'm your reviewer for the day...I really didn't see any errors or anything wrong in this chapter, and I'll be honest, I didn't read the first ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My West Wing

    This is a very beautiful poem as you've already been told. I did, like your first reviewer notice some mistakes that could be fixed but I'm sure she's filled you ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Girl

    This was an amazing, amazing, amazing, so many amazings poem! I loved it so much and the only thing I'd change is the capitalization of the words, it's kind of ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: in the face of filial piety

    I really lked this poem, however, it should be capitalized in almost every stanza and you didn't use your punctuation very well, I overall liked the layout but I just ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blue Mist

    So, I got in trouble for copying and pasting my reviews a while back and so I've learned heavily not to do that. So for the note: this isn't copied ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm Tired

    I can’t believe you think it works like that, You want to play it like that? I can play like that, You had no right to do that, No right ...

    Sep 7, 2011


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott