WriterSister33

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Thank you for the review!

And yeah, I know that it does not come any rhyme with better. But the Hole line rhymes: Weather, better...

Hey! Thank you for your review! I have Done some changes... I know that spring comes first, But in norway is it pretty could in spring too, so the snow ...

I jave changed the poem, if you would like to read it againXD

Hey! Thank you for your review! I have done a few changes, But not that much at line four... Just so you know is my name NOT WinterSister33 it%u2019s WriterSister33, ...

Thank you

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Wow!!! This was a very strong poem! I don’t know What to say, But you are a wreally good writer!! I am soon going to write a few poem myself:)

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Cool poem!! It’s fun to read new things Every time!:) Next year am I going to have a new years eve ball at school, so It’s fun to read! I ...

The hole story, or a spesific part??

Hi Fanta! Thank%u2019s for your review! Do you mean in the hole story, or a spesific part?