WritersUnleashed

I see an attempt at making a fancy rhythm, but It did not work out quite well. Sure, it was a good poem, but the rhythm did more harm than ...

OMG, i tottally forgot to post here. I told myself all last night too... And sadly enough I don't have much time, so this will be pretty much... on the ...

Heeey, you gave me a review. Lol. And it was a positive one so you get a double awesome welcome. And I love the wrods epic, ownage, and supercalifragalisticexbealladocious also.

This poem really hit home. Even though there are some rhythm mistakes I can spot, they do not matter. They actually give the story a better feeling. But yes, I ...

Did you just seriously misspel tomorrow? That is really bad, noticing that it is the thread name, so ya. The rhythm isn't really hard. It is a little hard to ...

Thank you!

How is a backwards 3rd letter obvious? Lol. I was searching for a minute straight, and I thought you were just pulling our tails. Then I saw I LOVE YOU ...

Ok, lets see. This is pretty good. And bad. At the same time. The drawing was really good, but had a few mistakes. And the mistakes show. The hand in ...

This is a short poems, reflecting on the demons of my past. No, I do not mean that this is really what I do, I'm just putting it into poetic ...

Lol, this was really good. I imagined, for some straaange reason, two little turtles. One had a mohawk, and the other had blonde pig tails. I imagined the turtle cheating ...

A little thing about the repetition. I know you didn't do it that well, but it is a pretty easy fix. First, take out the repetition in line 3. It ...

I wasn't saying that I couldn't understand it. Im good at seeing what poetry means. It was just a little confusing at first.

NoOoZzz!.|! Itz nawt seriuss. Anyways, i liked this poem. It added a touch of comedy to my day. I thought this, for some strange reason, was going to be about ...

Being somebody who really is andvanced in math, and really hates the subject, I was... touched in a way, I guess. I always say to myself, in the midst of ...

Bleeding hearts that were once full of promise Now lay like scattered ash on the floor In a world that used to be pure bliss Now gently fly away to ...