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Hi Cole. :) This is a really amazing piece. I mean really really amazing! I can understand it quite well. There are some churches that have gone astray. But you ...

HI Katty, I hath come to review thy writings. I did notice you forgot the space between "reason" and "and" here "Like some people only please others for their own ...

Hello DukeofWonderland, haven't I seen you somewhere before? Anyway, onto the review. I'm not the most skilled in poetry. But I have written a few and I enjoy reading them. ...

Hello Swiftfur. :) You have no idea how many times I've done exactly what you've stated there. I must agree with BlackNether12, this needs to be longer. A lot of ...

Hello Chancesnchanges, Wolf here to review your work! On the technical side of writing, your grammar and spelling and whatnot looks fine. I think you did good at portraying emotion. ...

Hello btm1, Wolf here to give a quick review. Well, I really don't see much to critique. So I guess it's just my opinions. I think that this was done ...

Hi Mattimias, I have come to review your work! I have to say, when i first pulled up this page and I saw how short your poem was, I thought ...

Hello Demoness, Wolf here to review your poem! The first thin I noticed is that this poem definitely has a lot of emotion in it. I can really feel for ...

Hello Iheartbooks! I've come to review your work. The places that you chose tobring dawn and start a new line seem kind of odd to me. But it has been ...

This is very pretty, I really liked it. I feel inspired to write a story now(LOL, thats just how I am). It flowed nicely most of the time, and it ...

This is a really great piece. I don't think there really is much to critique. I'm kinda wondering what would have inspired this? I feel the truth in this. The ...

That is so cool! I wish I had purple glasses... I like the way you had the first one showing both through your glasses and without the glasses. On the ...

A few grammar/spelling mistakes... "Inever really knew how thin the line between love hate was ,neither did I know how thin the line was between life and death." You forgot ...

This is awesome. Just awesome. And the worst part is, I don't know why. Some peoples' writing is just like that though. When I read a history book and see ...

This piece sounds nice. It has a light happy feel to it. The one thing I noticed is there are a lot of lowercase letters that should be uppercase(the beginning ...