Wynorrific

I absolutely love this! You've conjured up the image of a horrifying creature while providing us very little solid facts about its appearance. I find that brilliant. According to the ...

Hey Liberty, this is a beautiful poem. You created a soothing image in my head--- I really pictured floating on the deep end of a pool. I had actually never ...

Hey, Necromancer14 (cool name), I really liked your poem! You created a nice atmosphere and spooky imagery. In the beginning, I got the idea that this wasn't supposed to be ...

First of all, I'm going to go ahead and agree with aaliyah on the structure. I absolutely adore the flow of this poem. It is indeed chaotic, but everything about ...