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Who said she died? That's what this is about, nothing ever truly ends. Just like this poem didn't have a definite ending, anything could have happened. It could have clicked ...

A really good friend and my first love passed away suddenly from an unknown brain tumor last May, 11 days after his 18th birthday. I was getting a memorial tattoo ...

He is an angel to her, someone that that passed away. Someone she loved. That's why he has ho'holy feathers adorne his wings' . Its kind of cryptic, I know ...

It actually came in my mind as a song, with a steady beat to it. Almost a rap. It was strange. Thanks :) I liked how it twisted at the ...

Agin' = Aging. This was originally going to be a Facebook post so I'm talking about the gossiping and jabbing on there. I wasn't really sure how to punctuate a ...

Thank you both :) I will take what you said into consideration when I write my next poem. XOChange

Thanks Nutty :) The Dream thing, where she is, the point is for the reader to almost be as confused as she is. she doesn't know if it was a ...

Thank you all so much for your words of encouragement and sympathy. This was something I just threw together, wrote the words as they came to mind. I will edit ...

I really like this one. The way it's written, the concept, the message. The whole thing is really good. Very Good Job Keep It Up XO Change

Okay, that reply to ya'll's reviews sounded kind of rude. I really didn't mean for it to be and I'm soooo happy that you both took time to review some ...

Okay :) First off, Nyte is her name :) Second, she really is in the basement. And not knowing if her dream was really a dream or if it was ...

I liked this piece. Very emotional. It's always good when you can get out what your feeling like this. I did think some of your lines just didn't go together. ...

Sounds good. Only one thing. I thought it was wench not wrentch?

Thanks for the review :) I really appreciate it. I'm looking to post my old stuff as is, see what you all say and then revise it :) XO Change

I agree with everyone else. Your are a very talented writer. You will go far. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.