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XYZinnia

  • Lyrics Re: Just friends

    Hello! :D Ok, nit-pick time! I said our relation shouldn’t end. I’m not sure “relation” is the right word. Let’s pretend there never was this day. The flow is off ...

    Jun 4, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: IM waiting... {Part One}

    Hello! :D XYZinnia, here to review! I will try to steer clear of what others have said, but I may repeat them. Here we go! Tayyluh: I can’t believe were ...

    Jun 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I've Nothing Witty To Say

    Chatspeak makes me ill anyways. I like you already. So…. Welcome to YWS! It’s awesome here! So, I see Lucy told you the rules, (and gave you a grand entrance,) ...

    Jun 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm addicted already

    Hello! :D Welcome to YWS! It’s great here, you’ll love it! Ok, so rules: 1. Rate you works. You can rate it G, PG, PG-13, or R. You really need ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NATEY-POO!

    Happy Birthday Nate! :D :smt113 Thank you so much for creating YWS! So… Yay Nate! Yay Birthdays! Yay Young Writers Society! :D

    May 30, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Swear

    Hello! Y here to review! :D So, I mostly did nit-picks. Here ya go! “Evangeline , your time has come. Your destiny awaits you,” Comma. he plunged to the ground ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey it's Lulu!

    Hello! I’m Y! :D Welcome to YWS! I don’t recognize you. Are you from a different writing site? Anyway, here on YWS we have some rules. So… 1. Rate your ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: hej hej

    Hello! I’m XYZinnia! :D Welcome to YWS! It’s wonderful here. So, since Kaylyn told you the rules, I will tell you about the colors! If you’ve noticed, some people here ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Howdy Everyone :-)

    Why Hello! :D My name is Y! Welcome to YWS! The place where the sun always shines, and butterflies dance in the air. :) (Well, not really.) So, as for ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello From The West Coast!

    Hello! I’m XYZinnia, Welcome to YWS! You’ll love it here! So, I’ll get the boring old rules out of the way first. 1. There is a 2:1 ratio here. So, ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Pain

    Hello! XYZ here to review! :D Some may think it’s a game Like it is an art But it’s so hard to tame When it’s felt in the heart First ...

    May 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Heartless, a book im starting, please help with editing

    Hello LoVeLeSs! (That was fun to type!) XYZinnia here to review! :D Warning: I might say something that Templeton, Lakegirls, or Antigone might have already said. If so, I’m sorry! ...

    May 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Heartless pt.2

    Hello! :) It’s me, XYZinnia! I just pick out a few things I saw, mostly nit-picks. So, with out further a due: It made me want to hug him and ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Everything else

    Hello! :D Ok, this will be kinda hard, because I don’t know the tune, but here it goes! My friends are gone they have chosen sides “They have” doesn’t flow ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: This is not a fairytale

    Hello! :D First of all, I agree with Mars. It will be hard to critic this, since I don’t know the tune. But I’ll try! :) Don’t tell me I’m ...

    May 28, 2009


It doesn’t smell old, it just smells like a bad idea.
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