XYZinnia

Hi there Zenjoy! First of all, let me say that I really like the idea of this song; comparing the joy and sorrow of love to a cassette tape. I ...

Hi there Lsh! :) So, did you know you put this in Art & Photography? I see that you've been around for a while, so I would assume it was ...

Hello! I’m XYZinnia! :D So, when you post here on YWS, it’s really supposed to be your own work. I know for a fact that I’ve seen that Haiku before. ...

Hello! :D Ok, nit-pick time! I said our relation shouldn’t end. I’m not sure “relation” is the right word. Let’s pretend there never was this day. The flow is off ...

Hello! :D XYZinnia, here to review! I will try to steer clear of what others have said, but I may repeat them. Here we go! Tayyluh: I can’t believe were ...

Hello! Y here to review! :D So, I mostly did nit-picks. Here ya go! “Evangeline , your time has come. Your destiny awaits you,” Comma. he plunged to the ground ...

Hello! XYZ here to review! :D Some may think it’s a game Like it is an art But it’s so hard to tame When it’s felt in the heart First ...

Hello LoVeLeSs! (That was fun to type!) XYZinnia here to review! :D Warning: I might say something that Templeton, Lakegirls, or Antigone might have already said. If so, I’m sorry! ...

Hello! :) It’s me, XYZinnia! I just pick out a few things I saw, mostly nit-picks. So, with out further a due: It made me want to hug him and ...

Hello! :D Ok, this will be kinda hard, because I don’t know the tune, but here it goes! My friends are gone they have chosen sides “They have” doesn’t flow ...

Hello! :D First of all, I agree with Mars. It will be hard to critic this, since I don’t know the tune. But I’ll try! :) Don’t tell me I’m ...

Hel-lo, XYZinnia here to review this piece! :D So to start off, I’m going to bomb you with Nit-Picks! :) He seemed almost joking, his almond shaped eyes, the color ...

Hello! XYZinnia here! Welcome to YWS! :D I saw where you posted you wanted reviews for this, so here I am! First of all, you should put this in the ...

To start off, I would just like to say that I really liked this. :D It explained a lot of things that the movie didn’t, like the animals and what ...

Hello! :D Ok, there really isn’t that much to review, but I do have a few comments. First of all, I think you used “three simple” too much. Try replacing ...