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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sally the Silly Siamese

    What a sweet piece of poetry! This poem is short, cute and fitting of a children's book. A few tips: some of the rhymes are just a tincy bit little ...

    Nov 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Serial Killer Eyes

    Brilliant, I really enjoyed how this story played out. Thank you for the coloured representation, it's nice to have a character who isn't white. The story is a little on ...

    Nov 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Alias Unknown

    Hey, this my first ever review since I'm new to this site so I hope you find it helpful! First of all, this is great. The story hits you quickly ...

    Oct 31, 2018


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien