Xaxas96

Thanks, I shall see if I can't find the mistakes.

Interesting I shall look over it and check it some time.

I try my best!

Thank you! Since you don't want to know the actual meaning behind this I can not tell you why the boy was crying. The shouts however were not suppose to ...

I worked on this quiet a bit, if someone would please look it over I would appreciate it.

Thanks, I didn't think it was confusing but now that there is some feed back I can start fixing stuff

Any comment would be helpful because I don't think I'm doing great

Thanks for the advice

Please post what you think of it.