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Re: An Eternity of Shadows: A Vampire's Requiem
ahh... both of your reviews/comments are vital to me... i thank you and andy for giving pointers wich i will most likelty change and review... as for that vulgary quote... ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: The Day That Every Planet Died (Except For Mars)
well i liked it... some parts more then others... the end specifically was best i think... and i dont think hes satiring anything... are you? its just stupidly bad and ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Her Silent Undoing
heyy i liked this.. i think... well i liked the beginning... well was that like a dream? or was that real? would have been cool if it was real... butta... ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Shadows of Eternity - Chap. 1
:smt059
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Train Wreck Chapter one
this was really good. do not touch it. it dost not need fixing... dont listen to anybody. i love it and i think i wanna marry it.
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Introduction
oooh this was goood... especially the beginning, nice way of deswcribing you are in a dream, and such, the next paragraph was ok, not as good as the first, good ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Gods Pink Skunk
hey mr nolan... i think you have some sperm stuck in your teeth... no lon.. i mean no lol. no lol! i kid i kid, i kid because i love ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: The Night of Stop-Beating
ps. i didnt even read the first kastanzas till now.... the industrias city, ooh i think i likey... but then it kinda fell down.. and it could of been worded ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
Thank you, you cute little bear that i thought was an ant eater at first you. Im working on the re-write! and so maybe it will be better then! OK! ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Voicebox
i dont know what what happend.. i assume it was good and tasted like cake.. but i just dont know what it is.. you know what i mean?
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Hey Baby
eh, wasnt really feeling this, the beginning anyway, didnt flow to well in my mind, but the end was prettty good and depressing, can relate-- so this is it? ok ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: That Little Fog Inside: A Man Who Has Just read a story by
hey hey how come none of mhy questions got answers.. what am i not getting that this guy with the bear picture gets.. i see this guy going up to ...
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: The Cold
ooooh spicy spicy meata ball!!
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: Gods Pink Skunk
yea well... good luck to you too, cause i hope nate doesnt bann you!.... which they said they would. ok im kidding i didnt tell on you gys.. which i ...
Jul 27, 2008 -
Re: Gods Pink Skunk
First off of what i ws told thaqt you rar enot suposed to judtge the actual work but only the grammar.. and im not sure any of you, sorsha, or ...
Jul 26, 2008