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Thanks for your help! I'll be sure to fix it once I get the entire story done! This is my first attempt at writing any form of story so I ...

Thank you!

Thank you for the help! I'll definitely change what you pointed out!

This is an awesome chapter! The part where Goro thought 'It's official: I hate life' totally made me chuckle! That was my favorite part. I didn't find any mistakes and ...

Oops sorry! ^~^'

This was my first story that that I've ever put up online and I really didn't care much for the grammar and other things (Even though I really should have). ...

This is really good! I may not watch Sherlock but this really drew me in! I don't see any problems with this but I'm not the best mistake-searcher. I really ...

Thanks for helping me out! I really didn't notice the problem with the commas until after I looked at it. Word kept telling me that something was wrong but I ...

Aww... I wish you added some more stuff! You can't just leave it at a cliffhanger on the first part! But anyways I really like this!

@MaryEvans Thanks a lot for the help! I know I need to try and describe things a bit more ( and I'm trying) and change up the words and grammar. ...