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Greetings from The Swordsman, You said that this was, "By far your best short story." Though this is only the second, I have a hard time believing that there is ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, I have to say that there isn't much that I can say is wrong with this story. Your descriptions bring a great deal of imagery to ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, This was an interesting piece. There are some things that don't quite make sense to me, but I will get to those in a moment. I ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, Living with someone who has anxiety, I understand a little of what your main character is going through. I also understand how frustrating and terrifying it ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, This story was...interesting. The idea that it was all just a really bad LSD trip really was an intelligent way to go. is really choppy. The ...

Greetings from The Swordsman, I would first like to say that this poem, though short, speaks volumes. That is how poetry is meant to be written. Using a few choice ...

This is a wonderful letter to a character that has brought me smiles many times. His childlike demeanor and sense of wonder get him into more trouble than he bargains ...

Greetings, This was certainly an interesting idea. The dream in a dream about a person's insecurities, especially dealing with an interest. I have to say that I like the idea. ...

Greetings, There is a lot here. The feeling of rejection. The feeling of hurt from having no one that supports you in your passion. I don't know a writer or ...

Greetings, I am glad that you sent me a message to read through your next chapter. I hope that what I have to say will be of help to you. ...

Greetings, This is great! I actually did one of these recently myself. Writing a story about an object without revealing what it was until after the story was done. I ...

Greetings, This was a great piece of work. The idea of remembering a smell so strongly that to seek it out for the sake of a memory is a good ...

Greetings, This was a wonderfully sweet song. From a hear that is happy and excited about being in love. I have almost no ability with lyrics and I am glad ...

Greetings, I have to say that these lyrics are both beautiful and haunting. I can't really tell what the song itself is about. I can see that it is about ...

Greetings, This was a wonderfully written poem. Obviously that of a child to their mother. It is simple and it is kept short, as things of this nature should be ...