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Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
It's alright, I didn't mean to offend you at all. I'm sorry if I did, I just meant to say that "leech" was a Twilight phrase. Please don't take any ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
I'm sorry, I really am not trying to sound mean, but what other words would I use to insult a vampire if not "leech" and "bloodsucker"? Yes, I realize that ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
Thank you for your help. Seriously, I always miss this type of stuff when I go back and edit. Also there is more on her brother in the next chapter...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: What Would You Say
Okay, let me be honest and rant a little. When I came to this line, I really started to cry. It's just the connectivity between this line and the lines ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Preface
Hey! I would just like to start by saying you have a very strongly written piece on your hands! Onto the nit-piks. My comments are in italics and my fixes ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
Haha, I really liked it. It was funny, dark, and twisted.
Mar 3, 2009