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Re: Forbidden Fruit
Your poem is very moving, but I couldn't see the main idea. Is there some central point?
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: I hate Life
I couldn't find anything to critique. It was very good.
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: God Knew
I like it. especially the part about how H'e there forever
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Nothing Comes To Mind.
enjoy it I did. The simple expression of writer's block while writing something good to express it
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Cramps
Exactly how I feel. I get cramps a lot. It's @*&#! painful.
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Ode to Burnt Toast
Ode to Burnt toast... fascinating :). hope to see more.
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: OK this is kind of stupid...lol
What do you mean post a "good" one later? all poetry is good. I've written stupider stuff. what matters is not how much sense it makes. Poetry is a way ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Cruel to be Kind
curious...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Ode to A Stale Pastry
I've never heard of an ode to a stale strudel. I found it quite amuing, though a little strange.
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Footnotes
Nice job, Bubble! althought don't let penguin attack se your signature :D
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Such Is Poetry.
I like it, Penguin! kepp up the good work ;)
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Corny....It's funny! I wrote it like three years ago and...
*clap clap clap clap* very nice
Nov 6, 2007