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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: [Halberd] Ruby File (1) Casino (scrapped)

    An organized group trying to capture Sins? Hell to the yeah! Love the concept! Not the first time someone wrote about people trying to destroy embodiments of sin, sure, but ...

    Aug 30, 2014


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