YellowSweater

Thank you so much for your excellent review! It super helpful to hear where the dialogue, world building gets, and inter-language word play gets confusing. I'm also not a native ...

Thank you so much for your kind review! I am a huge fan of prose poetry as well. I don't know why, but when I write poetry in stanzas it ...

Thank you so much for your sweet review! A lot of people have been saying they find the snack line confusing, so I might need to re-work it. I don't ...

Thank you so much for your suggestions and for sharing your thoughts! I am so glad you got so much out of it. And I am really happy with all ...

I really really love this.

Thank you so much for your review! I love hearing your comments! I 'm glad you liked the stories!

Thank you so much for the review! You highlighted some of my favorite parts:) Yeah, I feel like it would be fun to try to draw some sort of connection ...

Oh goodness, this is so lovely! I'll come back later when I have time and leave a review:)

Ooh! I totally agree about the title! And I love the idea of tying the future back into the island piece. I think it would round it out! Thank you ...

Also, sometimes my view is more is more like my cousins, other times it%u2019s like what I wrote. Depends on my mood (and the highway lol)

Aw! Thank you so much! You made my day :)

Thank you so much for your review! it definitely helped. And I am planning on working on the transitions:) It's good to know when they feel awkward. Thanks again for ...

Thank you so much for your review and your thoughts! I agree that it jumps around a bit. I'll try to make the transition smoother in the next draft.

Thank you so much for your review! I am really glad you liked the story and the world:)

Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback! This is definitely more of a creative nonfiction piece than a conventional essay, so it's more telling the story of my journey ...