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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Epiphany

    Hey! First off, I love the first five lines. I think the repetition of "I" and "Fly" work really well in this piece to help paint the scene. However, the ...

    Jun 3, 2016


For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes."
— A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett