YoungMom1210

The rose shows up more in the next chapter :)

Thank you very much :) I am still tweaking it so any criticism is appreciated !! Thanks for the review !!!!

I am re writing everything and making it a lot longer lol , Ill try and post the new and improved chapters soon :)

Thank you very much for the feed back , I have been going through and re-writing a lot of the chapters that are here, I just haven't posted them yet ...

The second life is kind of in the third chapter lol I do appreciate all this feed back ! I am going to re write it all and hopefully it ...

Thank you very much , I appreciate the feed back :)

Thank you :) I will go through and make some changes ! this is an old draft and i just didn't want to go through it again but i definitely ...

Thank you for the feed back ! This is an old story and I didn't go through it and proof read :) So thank you for this ! I will ...

This is a very well done piece ! You just have a lot of spelling/grammatical errors. Just watch and review your stories before submitting them and I'm sure you will ...