Yuriiko

Oh my Jash! This is awesome, I tell you. At first I didn't know why you were going to take my profile picture and it was quite a surprise when ...

Hello there! I'm honored to be your reviewer for today. My feet pounded against the cobblestone street. I was scared as hell. Looking back, I could see the three boys ...

someone who likes fish.

Oh my, Jash. You don't have to post that. xD *flies away*

Zathura!

Hello there Jash! It seems that the previous critiques has covered almost everything, and I apologize in advance if ever you see this review repetitive. But no worries, I have ...

Hey there, Nike! I found the strings on the internet. Wouldn't be better if you wrote 'chords' than 'strings'? That’s when someone knocked on my door and 'That was when' ...

Banned for calling calling us morons. :wink:

Granted but you just took two sleeping pills and now you're in the state of Insomnia. (why the negative one age by the way? lol) I wish there'd be no ...

I am done. :)

Hello there Coral! First of all, I totally agree with the previous critiques. Though the theme has been used and read many times, I think the twist you added here ...

Way to go! 8D

Hey there, Megsug! ^^ First of all, I think you have a good story concept. I like the main character's innocence and starts to grow maturely at the middle part. ...

Hey there Hope! First of all, I like the opening and much more with the ending. The story concept is nice because it gives bit of a message to the ...

Hello there! First of all, this is a very sweet short story. I understand your writing style, you leave your readers some questions and it's up to them how they'd ...