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Yzjdriel

Yzjdriel

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Pearl

    Hiya! My thoughts: Try not to force your lines to rhyme just because you feel like you have to: it markedly drives the quality down. Not everything needs to rhyme ...

    May 16, 2017


"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind