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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of Taer

    lol... I know I'm going to blow my head on this one. When I looked at your length, I noticed two times the editing I have with the others. It's ...

    Nov 18, 2004
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: First part

    Okay, here ya go... "Snow came down like it never had before" -instead of tellimg me all about this, try to find some way to show that this is happening. ...

    Nov 16, 2004


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint