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Zachary

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.

    I really appreciate all your advice thank you!!! I'm a pretty new writer especially when it comes to stories so all your advice is very helpfull!! I have some trouble ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Discovery Of Love

    Hello! I really like this poem. My favorite part is how they both feel like the other is perfect but they don't know the other feels that way too. I ...

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: The Bully. Chapter 2.

    Not a review but just letting you know I LOVED your second chapter! Leaves me waiting eagerly for the third! Keep it up this is awesome! :)

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.

    edited it if you'd like to read it :)

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.

    Thank you, I was actually thinking about how to do that because I know I have a problem with introducing too fast. I'm working on it and appreciate your input!!

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: The Bully. Chapter 1.

    I enjoyed this so much!!!! I love the two sides of Felix, I can kind of relate except for the bullying. Anyway very good writing. And I think you forgot ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.

    Okay thanks haha I'm new...

    Jul 30, 2014


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