Zelalem

thanks for the help you guys!

Thank you so much for the comment. Yeah, the poem is for Health class, so it's kind of like D.A.R.E. By the way I have some awesome news, my health ...

thank yo u so mch Snoink!

thank you so much! Any suggestions for the beginning and end?

yeah, i realize i REALLY have to edit this. I'll be working on it, and thanks for all your help. Does this poem even make sense? Because if it doesn't ...

Your writing really does amaze me. I'm completely in awe after I read one of your poems. I just did an essay of Joan of Arc, it's an eerie reference. ...

Knowing all too well that they’d trade the taste For a goodnight’s kiss How true. I love this poem. Especially the ending.

That's such a sweet poem. But the story you have is very sad...

This poem was amazing! One of my favorites! But I think it would be a lot better with Nicole Lynn's punctuation edits. It makes it seem more...real. Great job. Really ...

I really like this poem. Great Job! It has a great message, keep up the good work.

Thank you so much for the comment! Question: Are people on YWS supposed to thank people for commenting? On Deviantart it's extremely rude to not thank somebody, (unless you get ...

Thanks so much Angel!

Thank You so much WritersDomain (and Xanath again.) You guys really help me! I didn't originally put much thought into this poem because it was a quick thing I did ...

Okay thank you so much! I'll be adding more to this soon and editing it. Perhaps posting a revised version on this thread. I really have to work on rhythms ...

Thanks for all your help! (Man people on this site are really nice.) I'll try to revise this poem soon!