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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Dangerous Dream

    Okay, I really like this. I love the way you describe the weather. I adore your writing style! Write more! It is rather short. I don't have much critique, except ...

    Oct 15, 2009


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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